JOSE MURGUIA

aztlan CITY OF ANGELZ! (EL MONTE)
JOSE MURGUIA
aztlan CITY OF ANGELZ! (EL MONTE)
Sunday, January 25, 2009

Crystal Meth. Comments

Rating: 4.8
hi crystal how you been?
it's me your ex from way back then,
i remember how you made me feel,
do you remember how i almost got killed,

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JOSE MURGUIA
COMMENTS
Addict 12 February 2019
Thank you for your words of truth
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The Lost.. 14 October 2009
you made me imagine things that weren't there, i thought you loved me but in reality you didn't care, actually when u love someone you feel that he also loves u then u realise that he hates u :) nice poem.
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Aube Joshua 14 October 2009
I donot know if there is a man or a woman who breathes and has not once in life been 'defeated' in love. But if there is one, s/he has not known a whole dimension of life. For, pain, as it can cripple, can also open unknown galleries of experience and sensitivity. Sometimes, one cannot rate a poem, because one cannot have an objective view of it. I can just say thanks very much for sharing.
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Lynn Glover 13 October 2009
Well Jose, I like the rhythem and the subject. I hope you are sincere in staying away from this stuff. I only have heard about these drugs, but never did any so I don't know how hard it is to stop. I just pray that you have defeated this monster. Good message for anyone who would dare to think about doing. I reallly like the way you composed the poem, a very good write. Your friend Lynn.
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James Mclain 13 October 2009
I have never done it but i have heard of people that have it is a bad disease like all the rest.. and there is hope but it has to start in the heart of the one that needs it...iip
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Rhiley Anne Vincent 13 October 2009
Well written. The extended metaphor makes it easier to relate to.
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Krishnarasa Seshadri 13 October 2009
A message worth remembering! Very well penned! Thank you for sharing....
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Marilyn Lott 28 September 2009
You send out an urgent message to those who have even 'thought' about using this horrible stuff. I've heard terrible stories and seen some who got sucked into this nightmare. Good for you for stopping it and sending the message. '10+++! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn
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George Anastasia 21 September 2009
Oh just one more thing Jose. If you could check out my poem callled Fire Fight. I also have live reads on my space and you tube. uner the key word of George Garrett Anastasia. let me know what you think. Thank s The lightman George Garrett Anastasia.
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George Anastasia 21 September 2009
Bewear of the surptions stainless steals bit. He will creep on up, day or night make you think everything is alright, but only death in the seriptions bite. I to am a ex-user. You did a good job on this poem. The Lightman George Garrett Anastasia.
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Mystery Pain 21 September 2009
I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
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Chamekka Jones 17 September 2009
OMG! ! ! ! ! ! ! STANDING OVATION JOSE! I TOO AM IN RECOVERY. I CELEBRATE 1 YR THIS MONTH AND MY BELLY BUTTON TOMORROW! LET'S TALK!
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Luisa Sanchez 07 September 2009
Omg I luv this poem...and u did a good job...u could be a role model for other with poetry and u are a warm hearted person and the ability to write the world
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Amber Vasquez 10 March 2009
Its true it can be addicting but im glad you stopped! Great poem!
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Gina Layog 09 March 2009
I like your poetry, for its simplicity and honesty, People could relate to this, the addiction, the rush, Hope you're done with all this mess, You have your life and poetry, this you are blessed! ! ! !
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Jazzmine Virden 03 March 2009
This is one great poem, its very true! !
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Alesha Garrett 22 February 2009
This poem is great. I do hope u and crystal meth r done! ! !
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Peter Franco 14 February 2009
Very raw, honest and real. Congratulations, a job well done. PS: typographical error on 'pail' it should be pale. Keep writing, you are a good poet.
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Kerrial Newham 11 February 2009
i dont say this often, but amazing poem, great wording, very well written. serously not just saying that. 10 out of 10
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Eldon M Thomas 03 February 2009
Wow! Good poem. I like the way you personify the drug like a bad ex girlfriend! That's really good.
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