Savage little naked fool
with puny weapons of love
fly yourself to another heart
before I snap your wings.
Point poison arrows at me again
and feel the wrath I reap
and I will be right there with her... Ya go gettem Viola! ! ! lol. this made me smile. very good job.
A small and wonderful poem, love it.10++
Simply the greatest poem i've on this site so far...i need not say more
The sting of his arrow that never leaves; either bringing joy or sadly sorrow!
Your advice to Cupid is very well put, although I feel you are a romantic at heart and when you are ready it too will return!
he will get you again, thats when you kick the...... out of him.regards Tom 10/10
How can you not like a poem that threatens to rip the wings off a little angel...still laughing...Coach
Alas, he'll aim at you again when you're not looking. And that's when he's most dangerous!
Wonderfully sardonis piece.
very intersting piece of work I loved it my 10
i love it.
a definite 10! !
keep writing...i like this aggressiveness.
That Cupid...he's really a demon in disguise. Great poem :)
Good work here Viola...
Looks as if everyone agrees,10! ! ! ! !
lol you tell him good and proper viola, there is no one more dangerous than a wounded lover....smiling at you, Tai
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