Saturday, January 10, 2009

Cupid Comments

Rating: 5.0

Last night I went out once again
To ply my ancient trade.
I've seldom heard a word of praise
For all the love I've made.

...

GREENWOLFE 1962
COMMENTS
C. P. Sharma 03 March 2010

Awesome poem, skilfully crafted with arrow aimed in perfect line. I loved, And when I do, I'll string my bow, And line my arrow true. And then the world will see once more What Cupid still can do. Confident ardent love. CP

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Rachel Butler 22 September 2009

If someone ever gave you love, I hope you'll give just due; Rachel Ann Butler

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Saadat Tahir 16 July 2009

very well written... an ardent wish... less likely granted by providence... ;) vivid crisp and fresh like the rustling pines cheers

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Cristy Upshaw 29 May 2009

this is so awesome. I love the imagery you have portrayed. your mind of so far beyond mine. such greatness your words leave on pages.

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Laurie Hill 06 February 2009

Couldn't you get a ''Gatling'' bow? : 0) An excellent read

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Catrina Heart 04 February 2009

Love is sweeter the second time around...if only given the chance to make things right...How humble you are to admit that you are the one who have to be blamed from the crossed roads that turned you to blue...Truely heartfelt for a great man accepts his mistakes..........beautiful poem written with fine rhymes too...10/10

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Lina Depina 01 February 2009

this poem is very well written... i love this poem

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Rivers' Baby Gurl ;) 22 January 2009

OMG! ! ! ! ! this is my fave of urs so far! ! ! ! keep writing i enjoy it

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Catrina Heart 22 January 2009

Great and awesome poem Wolfy! So heartfelt yet written very nicely in a poetic verses...A cupid who wants to have a second chance to coup up all the lost times...Loved it.10+++

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Lynda Robson 20 January 2009

Excellent Wolfey, expressive and good rythm, 10 Lynda xx

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~ Jon London ~ 20 January 2009

Hi wolfman, I enjoyed this piece of fine poetic verses...you captured more in your shortness than it takes me in 12 pages..........you're a great poet my friend...keep up the good work............keep expressing and I'll keep reading with a smile. Best of Health & Happiness Jon

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 20 January 2009

Your choice is right Wolfe.Just stick to this traditional form of writing which you are good at.Good job bro!

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Jose Murguia 19 January 2009

a well written poem good job greenwolfe

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Miriam Maia Padua 19 January 2009

wow..a lovely poem for the coming day of hearts... desribes cupid's job in the most lovely way.... great piece...carrying the fragrance of valentine's day LOVE IS IN THE AIR..... my fave....CUPID.......10+++++

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Andrew Blakemore 19 January 2009

A truly great poem that has just about everything. Well done. Best wishes, Andrew

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baylei_ slater 19 January 2009

i love this..... i wish i wrote it! ! ! ! it make me think about this boy i like alot but he is stubborn....lol

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Tia Maria 19 January 2009

Excellent! An absolutely wonderful write - I can't stop reading it :) Such a talented poet you are Mr Greenwolfe. Honours to you

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Angela Tripoli 18 January 2009

nicee : ] lol very prettily told (i hope prettily is a word... lol: ])

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samar Halabi 18 January 2009

very lovely poem it is simply tells how tlanted you are I liked it so much... full of feelings and emotions great job...lovely title thank you Diana

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Vaibhav Pandey 16 January 2009

wonderful write sir.... I loved it. 10

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