Saturday, February 16, 2008

Daddy? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Daddy, can you hear my cries,
see the tears that stream
down my stained anguish face?

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Tracey Hardie
COMMENTS
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 17 February 2008

The absence of either parent in a child's life can manifest despondent feelings, that they can take with them into adulthood...However, when there is a ne-plus-ultra type of bond 'tween the child & their other parent...then, all that is positive & good in life becomes more than just a possibility...but in most cases, a reality...Your poem here very gently& nebulously intimates such a scenario....and i like the tone you set from the opening line to its moving conclusion.Stellar penning, young lady! ~ FjcR ~

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