Coral Chavez


Daddy - Poem by Coral Chavez

Daddy why did they take you from me,
All you wanted is to be free,
i didnt see you for a year or two,
During that time i felt so blue,

Daddy why did you go,
Why didnt you just do it right,
You could have tried with all your might,
But daddy i love you so,

They snitched you out,
Thats without a doubt,
I didnt want you to leave,
Hey, but i love the letters i recieved,

Daddy why did you go,
Why didnt you just do it right,
You could have tried with all your might,
But daddy i love you so,

Daddy you are my bestfriend,
I will be with you till the end,
Nobody will take you away from me anymore,
We have opened a new door.


Comments about Daddy by Coral Chavez

  • (4/1/2008 12:05:00 AM)


    This is an awesome write, the feel of love is felt in the words you have expressed in this piece. Take care and may peace and joy fill your heart each and everyday.

    Scott
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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 31, 2008



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