Wednesday, April 26, 2006

Daddy, Is This Love? Comments

Rating: 5.0

hes dying to come inside
and take every part of me
my heart, my body, my mind
but ive locked the door


Lorena Walker

Wow, another great write, a catching title, think i knew what it was gonna be about, flows well, a horrible topic to write about, but i have wrote this subject to! ! Keep writing, lee x

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Raveendran . 22 May 2007

This beautiful 'free' verse makes me sad.The experience you tell is brutal, there is something deeply wrong which needs to be addressed.

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Melvina Germain 15 May 2007

I'm crying right along with you Lorena, I believe we have met a day or so ago, I remember now, the pain is coming back. I truly wish you could have been saved and not had to go through such a horrific experience again and again. You must seek help to rid yourself of this pain. Excellent write, shows a great deal of courage.---Melvina---

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