Daffodils Fall Here Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

Daffodils Fall Here

Rating: 4.9


Bewitchingly smooth
deer's eyes penetrating
fragrance unlimited
cheeks reflecting
soft caramel honey
lips full bloomed
youth in a platter


placing the attraction to conquerors
................................................cupids
................................................arrows
................................................pointers

vanity remains unperturbed to hold
..................................................purity
..................................................chastity
..................................................virginity


partial exchanges
unbreaking triangles
irresistible despairs
apathetic desires
selfless selves
pleasureless bodies
without organs



belittled to withdraw on common
.............................................chaos
.............................................commotion
..............................................turmoil

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 11 September 2009

a fantastic cogitation and written well....nice poem....

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Paul Cutting 11 September 2009

very good it was do read

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Rajaram Ramachandran 11 September 2009

If you like this style, I have no reason to object it.

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Surya . 11 September 2009

again a wonderful poem.wonderful style. voted10 surya

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Ken E Hall 11 September 2009

Duel meanings here twice read to ingest the full picture good style thankyou for the poem regards

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there is a poet in me! 18 September 2009

wow.... great poem.... well done! !

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 16 September 2009

Sensitive and full of surprises. Keep writing!

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Merna Ibrahim 15 September 2009

Great poem contains great rhymes! ! ...10 I hope you take a look on my poems...Thanks for sharing. Merna

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Anand Madhukar 15 September 2009

A disturbing but brilliant write.

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Mimi Brown 15 September 2009

I agree with Les, beautiful rhythm. Lovely title. Daffodils are my favorite flower. I was nice to see the used so creatively.

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