Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Springfield, MA
Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski
Springfield, MA
Monday, May 28, 2012

Dandelion Comments

Rating: 4.3
Dandelion seeds
Wander gently in the breeze
After being set adrift
From their shared home

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Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski
COMMENTS
Bill Upton 23 June 2014
Tiffany, You show extraordinary insight for a person your age. Your poetry is well thought out and descriptively direct. Please continue to write. Your mind is a fertile warehouse for daily interpretation of life.
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Patricia Grantham 07 September 2013
Dandelion is a good title for this write. As we all know the dandelion grows in abundance with its yellow flower. Wishes are made so that a long lost love will appear just as the wind will blow the seeds far away and it will once again fall on fertile ground. I have a poem titled If We Ever Meet Again. Please read when you find time.
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Bose Perumal 19 January 2013
A nice exposition. its metaphysical and the cry from the bottom of a spirit. the persistent, penitent and pensive mood! OH! really lofry for a poetical rendering and the tear is the crystal clear symbol of our inward being. a tear can cleanse or tear away the heart. you have a pleasing way of expression. please try for more rythmic and rhyming along with the deep passion in your poems. yours friendly P.Bose 20/01/2013
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Walterrean Salley 02 September 2012
Another great job. A wonderful theme choice. The metaphor and personification are grand. The images, contents and expressions bring this portrait together. Very good. May you continue to inspire with your wonderful gift.
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Robert Roberts 17 August 2012
brilliant work, love the display and share brilliance in the twist of word
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This is also very fine, Tiffany, but if you want to improve this, you may need to establish clear references of your subjects and be faithful to what they stand for in the whole text: what about the seeds, the clear mind and the pronoun her. Where does she start from. Define what is her truest wish. The poet must serve the clear references for the readers to understand and see the coherence of the message. Again, you have to build up images, if necessary try to be dramatic.
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Sania Bashir 12 August 2012
u r relly a gr8 poet...well done
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Kelly Seale 12 August 2012
This was fun! ! ! I enjoyed the way your innocence is displayed here, carefree and playful, enjoying the beauty of such a splindid flower. Some consider a weed, but those of us who can see beyond the everyday nomality of it all, know better. The last few lines made this one special. Special because of your plea of love... desperate and innocent, and full of Hope. Very good write Tiffany! (next): -) -Kelly.
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Roland Houston 03 August 2012
I like it hun, very well detailed and put together, I absolutely love the ending ^^
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Caroline Bulleck 28 July 2012
This poem, to me, is beautiful, cute, sad and hopeful all at the same time. Dandelion is very well written. The imagery is very effective and I could feel the emotions the girl in the poem was experiencing. Another rating of ten!
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Julie Hutton 13 July 2012
I don't understand bring him here again, was a lovely light poem to read, but left me confused here
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Marcella D 12 July 2012
Now this has a theme/genre, it is happy. You can undertstand that the main character of the poem is happy. However, I wish you would add more after you said 'Please bring him here again' or give alittle more details of who this him is. Otherwise it would be random to put it there. Besides the point, this poem is much of a improvement to the last one I read 'Unenlightened :)
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Elena Sandu 03 July 2012
Great imagery, dynamic spread of dandelions seeding dreams, beautiful indeed! Thank you for share!
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Anthony Mcduffie 30 June 2012
WOW :) Best poet ever, I wish I was as good as U! :) 11 out of 10 ;) !
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Marop Aron 29 June 2012
I am very impressed this poem has the rating of 10!
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Raja Nosherwan 29 June 2012
I'm impressed, and this is not an easy thing to do. Well done.
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Thyris Taylor 29 June 2012
I really liked this romantic poem. It has whimsey along with depth of feeling. It is a poem that puts into beautiful expression that longing for the special one that stumbles into ypour orbit. Great job.
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Jinal Oswal 29 June 2012
A light smile dances On her lips as she sighs And whispers into the Bare stem, ''Please, Bring him here again.'' There have been times when I am sitting by the window, and suddenly I wish if the breeze could get him like he gets the fragrance of the flowers... I loved your poem... A true and innocent one..
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Kristina Shabunin 28 June 2012
I absolutely love this piece! ! ! ! ! It made my day so much brighter and my smile so much wider when i finished. you have amazing talent never forget that! (:
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Sally Plumb Plumb 28 June 2012
I can remember, as a young kid, playing dandelion clocks. You stirred my memory.That's what its all about.
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