Kelly Seale

Rookie (12-17-1958 / Norfolk, Va. USA)

'Dark Eyes' - Poem by Kelly Seale

Beauty throughout, beauty within-
Your beauty is unique, and lies deeper than skin.
Physicaqlly, your beauty is stunning, and that's no surprise,
but your most beautiful feature... Are those big, deep, dark, brown eyes.

Captivating, mesmerizing,
penatrating, hypnotizing...
Dark, deep eyes...
Sparkling and winking, shining, and I'm sinking...

It's ok, I can admit it, your eyes are my obsession, my addiction,
and your gaze is my drug.
I can't get you out of my mind-
You're all I'm thinking of.

The shape of your lips,
the smell of your hair,
the way my body tingles,
when I happen upon your stare.

These tantalizing fantasies I admit, I can no longer control...
These feelings that I'm feeling, baby, don't you know-
You've stolen my heart-
But your eyes own my soul.

'Hey there, Dark Eyes! '


Poet's Notes about The Poem

In my past... there was one that I could never get out of my head. Those eyes... drove me crazy.

Comments about 'Dark Eyes' by Kelly Seale

  • Alla Simone (12/17/2012 7:55:00 PM)

    Sparkling and winking, shining, and I'm sinking...
    It's ok, I can admit it, your eyes are my obsession, my addiction,
    You've stolen my heart-
    But your eyes own my soul.
    Beautifully described dark eyes.
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  • Ray Quesada (11/9/2012 1:05:00 AM)

    youve stolen my heart, but your eyes own my soul
    - - genius way to end the poem my friend! ! keep up the good work
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  • Darkangel FlyfreeDarkangel Flyfree (9/3/2012 7:24:00 PM)

    Nice poem, captivating and deeply passionate, im loven it! I too have been told my eyes are the best part of me, deep green eyes, I have! :) (Report)Reply

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  • Kelly SealeKelly Seale (8/30/2012 5:44:00 PM)

    Ah Penny, brown Penny, I agree with you 100%, You must read my piece called Saxaphone Eyes, it will take your breath away! Thanks Again for reading me, I promise, I'll get to your this weekend while at work! ; -)
    -Kelly.
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  • Kelly SealeKelly Seale (8/17/2012 2:27:00 AM)

    Yes, this was the one I read and loved so well by you. You are a gifted writer and I enjoyed your words very much (Report)Reply

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  • Cristina TeodorCristina Teodor (8/14/2012 6:29:00 AM)

    Beauty of those dark eyes finding such great expression in your verses.The words flow to my ears with rhythm and passion. Great write..Cristina Teodor (Report)Reply

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  • Kelly SealeKelly Seale (8/3/2012 6:17:00 PM)

    Thank you so much Lisa. I'm tickled to death that you enjoy my words so much and can enjoy the passion and emotion that I put into words! I look forward to your next reveiw of my writes and I will read yours tomorrow @ work! ; -) Laters!
    -Kelly.
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  • Lisa Struthers (8/2/2012 10:23:00 PM)

    I too can get lost in someone's eyes...this poem makes me swoon! I want someone that will get lost in my eyes like this! ! ! Thank you for such beautiful words :) (Report)Reply

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  • Kelly SealeKelly Seale (8/2/2012 6:41:00 PM)

    Thank you Rachel, it's one of my favs too! ; -)
    -Kelly.
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  • Rachel StreekRachel Streek (8/2/2012 6:11:00 PM)

    I really love this one. Great write (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 31, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 31, 2012


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