Dark Girl Poem by Uriah Hamilton

Dark Girl

Rating: 4.9


One day,
Dogs will laugh
In the streets,
And we’ll kiss wildly
Like lunatics
Escaping the asylum.

You’re a dark girl
So I’m painting
My roses black,

And I’ll murder the sun
If he ever turns his back.

I would rather
Enter the palace of your pain
Than continue to exist
In the prison cell of my loneliness.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Nagy 17 March 2006

Beautiful.........the last stanza says it all. Great poem Uriah. Sincerely, mary

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Sandra Fowler 17 March 2006

Strong imagery is displayed in this poem which speaks so eloquently of the bonding of two lonely souls. Regards, Sandra

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Gina Onyemaechi 18 March 2006

I'm rocked, Uriah, well and truly. Outstanding writing. Warm regards, Gina.

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Charles Chaim Wax 17 March 2006

insight into self the other and the monumental necessity of the heart for closeness that great declaration creating poetry of the utmost honesty and beauty.

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Austen Bradford 02 December 2006

this one reminds me of myself and I loved every line

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Ebone' Ingram 19 August 2006

at last...someone who respects the emo kids...*lol* eni da kid

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Dan Tharp 31 March 2006

I have only read a few of your poem, Uriah, so far... But, I have found myself intrigued by your writing style. dan

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this is an awesome poem, Uriah. very Beatific! Jake

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Ivy Christou 18 March 2006

ah uriah.. you've done it again, you have left your heart exposed in this poem of dedication to love. you never stop to amaze me :) HBH

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