Timothy Weiermann
Tucson, Arizona
Wednesday, July 30, 2008

Dark Souls With Blood Stains Comments

Rating: 4.9
My soul dyed dark with blood stains,
My eyes mask a hidden pain

My soul soaked with others death

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Timothy Weiermann
COMMENTS
Lmao Yeet 20 January 2017
It ironically sounds like the game Dark Souls.
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nice poem.... keep it up.
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Vampire Heart 26 August 2008
Very unique, an incredible wave of vocabulary with a mixture of emotions, lovely, keep up the good work
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Hannah Martin 21 August 2008
Omigosh! This is an incredable poem you've written! It's so depressing but it's so awesome how you combined your feelings and your love of poetry! That is an excellent poem....If you want you can look up my poems and read them.
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Paul Tousignant 12 August 2008
I've always had a thing for not so calming poems. And this one, well I can feel the power radeating off of it! And so we go, Paul
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Stacey Watts 11 August 2008
Wow this is very powerful! You really are a good writer. Keep using emotions I personally think it is what sets the darker side of writing apart from the fluff.
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Tyease Collins 11 August 2008
Awesome poem. I love dark poems like this. You are a really good poet -Tess C.
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Ency Bearis 08 August 2008
a good flow of verses...you did good work in this...nice
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Dawn Slanker 07 August 2008
This one is very good. I like the dark feeling you create with your words. This is a poem that can be felt. I have a question though. In the first line, did you mean to say 'died' or 'dyed' as in colored? I can see how both would work, but if you did intend 'died' then I would put a few elipses(...) after the word in order to avoid any more confusion as to meaning. My soul died...dark with blood stains. Write on young bard.
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Serenity Prayer 07 August 2008
wow....and i thougth the other one was great. lol. fanastic.
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Chad Fisher 06 August 2008
I truly loved the imagry in this poem.
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