Dat Girl Poem by david wells

Dat Girl

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the simple things you say to me seem to brighten up my day which make me realize
I cant go without you
Icant be without you
I cant sleep without you
The curve of your hips
is like an apple hanging from a tree
the roundness of your lips
makes a brother get down on one knee
your pretty brown eyes
your gorgious thick thighs
your medium body size
makes me realize
that you are my wife

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
AtreyaSarma Uppaluri 23 January 2010

Romantic love is a blend of the mental and the sensual...and that you've beautifully expressed...go get grab her! Good luck...

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Hirzel Davids 12 September 2008

lucky girl, i might say.: D. it's very often that guys write poems for girls. it's nice. :)

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Marci Made 17 May 2007

uhhhhhhhh David, is her name Patti or is your middle name Lee or Russell? ? ? ? Had to ask, , , , , if you are you than you know, , , marcia McC. Duggan. If not Hi David Wells and if not you, the one I knew looked like the Yankee Pitcher or so said a Bear as in [Chicago] one night in The Lantern, Lake Forest back in the 80's.

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Stellar imagework, and passionful tone...both which highlight this gemstone of work! Solid Crafting, Mr.David Wells(no relation to one of my favorite pitchers, while with the New York Yankees...yes, no?) FjR

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Derrick Clark 17 May 2007

i see good work in this poem.

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