Mark R Slaughter

Dawn - Poem by Mark R Slaughter

Dawn blushed – betrayed her waking sky
To gently break another morrow fine.
Night waned – the black receding – highland
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  • Brian Jani (5/3/2014 3:02:00 AM)

    Nice choice of theme (Report) Reply

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  • Fiona Schwartzinoff (1/19/2014 9:53:00 PM)

    Beautiful! It sort of reminds me of my own poem Twilight Haiku. :) (Report) Reply

  • (12/23/2012 4:56:00 PM)

    what an addicting poem is seems to flow nicely
    I can see this poem being a huge hit
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  • Sodoko Zavaki (9/15/2012 7:30:00 PM)

    love this poem =) nice job. Wow it's pretty long (Report) Reply

  • (7/5/2011 5:10:00 PM)


    Halcyon Poemcrafter
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  • Mohammad Muzzammil (11/7/2010 9:27:00 AM)

    Really a nice poem that expresses a beautiful thought regarding the dawn in a very impressive manner. Of course, the day break like a bride who opens her veil. You've present it in a very simple language but expression is great. (Report) Reply

  • (11/7/2010 7:25:00 AM)

    hey...ummmmm...i read this poem again and again but i couldn't understand it......a little help please? (Report) Reply

  • (10/19/2010 6:53:00 AM)

    'Dawn blushed; revealed her inner peace;
    She handed on another blissful day.
    Night ebbed, relenting to release of
    Warming blood that gives to her display'

    Nature, humanity, human feelings and mans reactions depicted blended upon philosopy and artistic talent.Please read mines too 'antidote' and ' giantsqurrel' somewht similar to your philosophy... dawn..please leave any comment welcome and best of 'blissfull wishes'' for your talents & posts...
    sisirachandra vaduge.
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  • (4/10/2010 9:52:00 PM)

    nice job! ! ! that really inspires (Report) Reply

  • (4/1/2010 11:16:00 AM)

    Cool Poem keep making them! ! ! (Report) Reply

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