Saturday, May 29, 2004

Dawn Beaches Of The City Of Tijuana Comments

Rating: 4.9

Tijuana beach sunrise
night's darkness passing
its colors to the stars...
orbing westward

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COMMENTS
Brian Jani 03 May 2014

Nice one jim keep writing

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Laughing@ You 27 March 2014

Dude (she said like a true Californian) - this is a rockin' piece of poetry. I am enjoying reading you this morning, over coffee, while nagchampa spirals in the air.

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Joscephine Gomez 12 May 2007

The last four lines of the fifth stanza draw my sympathy. I wish they are read by the party concerned.

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Christina Diaz 31 July 2006

whoa deep its like i want to go but then i think about history, i love it

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