Sunday, November 28, 2004

Daydreaming Comments

Rating: 4.4
Walk, fire, unimaginative wretch -
Draw to me the daydream
Scene. Dreaming whilst awake,
Of palm tree trails and fields

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COMMENTS
Rinzu Susan Rajan 30 September 2008
that took me back to my bful childhood days...! ! ! :) great poem
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Qendresa Ulaj 17 September 2008
your daydreaming is similar with mine... a great poem...
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... Sheila 16 April 2007
Ah, sweet memories of carefree childhood, filed away so long ago... emerge, leaving us with a terrible longing to have them back...if only for a day, for a moment. 'You let me see the world Through your beautiful eyes And for the first time In such a long, long time It's as though I can see it With the carefree spirit Of the child I used to be...Before the worry Before the pain Before the heartache. It looks like my long lost Memories, so sweet...'
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Goldy Locks 01 October 2006
hey! i really liked this! ~ cool & original ~ for what is usually a hackneyed motif. SusxGLx
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Charmaine Simpson 20 September 2006
I love to daydream - this brought back some old memories of growing up. Loved it. Charmaine x
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Patricia Gale 20 August 2006
A splendid piece, well done!
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Tears In Rain 04 September 2005
Keen free-association of sound-bites. Beating my brain like a drum.
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