akram saqib

Freshman - 739 Points (14 APRIL / SAHIWAL)

Days Never Last - Poem by akram saqib

Often I think
About you
When the feelings of love
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Comments about Days Never Last by akram saqib

  • (3/31/2009 9:00:00 PM)

    Great Poem, very moving! a joy to read! (Report)Reply

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  • (3/16/2009 11:07:00 AM)

    Goodness Saqib you are superb.You don't need my comments specially this poem.It is marvelous. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/2/2009 4:21:00 PM)

    It is a nice rhythm and flow. Easy to read and pleasant. Sentimental also. I like. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/2/2009 10:54:00 AM)

    hello baloch!
    thanks for the comment.....
    your poems are extremely good and poignant write indeed with nice rhythmic flows which felts like a water fall...keep it up with the great work....10+++
    rgds
    asif
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  • (3/1/2009 11:46:00 PM)

    your emotions drift across the page and straihgt into the heart..poignant write (Report)Reply

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  • (2/24/2009 3:32:00 AM)

    Rhymes fantastically, printed in eloquence..10 (Report)Reply

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  • (2/22/2009 1:00:00 PM)

    zabardast! ! !
    great flow
    Thanks for sharing
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