Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 147,966 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Dazzling Darkness - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

While we move in road in the dark,
Still we hope more to walk and spark,
We see from far horizon twinkle star,
Then we go on long drive in body car.

Ignorance makes darkness in life fights,
Gift is wisdom dazzles more also lights.
Where to go in the dark road is unknown,
Still wandering gives way, mind is shown.

Waving away the dust particles we move,
Invisible wind flies existence does prove.
Removing pain in cold winter or summer,
Still life's song we do frequently murmur.

There is nothing to note here or there,
Notable is righteous work with true care.
Fair it becomes while we wonder more
Thinking always about to cross shore.

Darkness dazzles while appears light,
While God's grace falls on us as might.
Night leaves way to rays to enter Earth,
In devotion towards God satisfies birth.

Date: 26 November 2014

Topic(s) of this poem: darkness, life and death, night


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem is written on 26 November 2014.

Comments about Dazzling Darkness by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Indira Renganathan (12/9/2016 7:52:00 AM)


    Darkness is trailed by Light...Night is trailed by Day....Sun is the Father of the two

    Darkness dazzles while appears light,
    While God's grace falls on us as might.
    Night leaves way to rays to enter Earth,
    In devotion towards God satisfies birth....wonderful poem- 10++++

    Thank you Kumar for your kind comments on my poems
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  • (11/12/2016 3:35:00 PM)


    Very inspiring. Beautifully illustrating how the light (love) always triumphs, no matter how much darkness. Definitely worthy of Poem of the Day. Congratulations! (Report) Reply

  • Rebecca Navarre (11/5/2016 4:18:00 PM)


    Incredibly Beautiful Poem! ! ! ! ! Just Breath Taking! ! ! ! ! I Love This! ! ! ! !
    Added To Favorites! ! ! ! ! Thank You So Much For Sharing! ! ! ! !
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  • Muzahidul Reza (10/19/2016 7:19:00 AM)

    Dazzling Darkness
    Heavily meaningful poem thats depicts darkness in light itself, so darkness is not removed & only God can remove it from the ignorant................... (Report) Reply

  • (10/18/2016 4:51:00 PM)

    Dazzling Darkness.
    I like your continual use of the rhyming quatrain. 'Dazzling darkness'-an oxymoron to be sure
    and very original. You have made me think again about darkness and light. Brilliant.
    Michael Walker.
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  • Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer (10/18/2016 6:27:00 AM)


    This poem could be an dream,
    Could be an imagination,
    could be an true,
    But truly amazing sir.10
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  • G. S Bhavi (10/18/2016 6:23:00 AM)


    Yes! after night comes the day and the journey of life reaches its destiny (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/11/2016 3:47:00 AM)

    AWESOME
    This is one of your best poem. I liked it, Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/9/2016 3:49:00 AM)

    Comment
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    Christina Simmons (London United Kingdom; Female; 55)
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    10/8/2016 5: 38: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
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    Dazzling Darkness
    A very hopeful and positive poem. Help to elevate one's fear of life coming to an end....? 10
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  • (10/8/2016 2:55:00 PM)


    A truly inspiring poem, filled with beauty and promise.
    From darkness will come the light for life, while the devotion to God
    helps to give meaning to our lives.
    Excellent poem of the day. Congratulations!
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  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (10/8/2016 10:58:00 AM)


    A host of precious thoughts for a courageous life; star of hopes at distance in life sky, keep moving in body car towards targets set, overcoming dusty barriers using the wisdom inherited, bearing pains as normal things in life as seasons, let us move on until we reach there as our faith has marked. Beautifuly crafted, encouraging and inspiring poem. No wonder yours has accomplished deserving PoD status. Thank you Kumar for the poem. X (Report) Reply

  • (10/8/2016 8:24:00 AM)


    Even in darkness we move with the hope of seeing light again. Congratulations for being selected this beautiful poem as poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammad Ahmadizadeh (10/8/2016 8:19:00 AM)


    Simply an excellent writing! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Clarence Prince (10/8/2016 7:42:00 AM)


    Even in everything, such as darkness, light, night, life, and death, God's in control! (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (10/8/2016 7:22:00 AM)

    to walk
    we hope more to walk and spark, beautiful sir, namaskar. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (10/8/2016 6:33:00 AM)

    Dazzling Darkness
    Congratulations sir on being selected as the poet of the day! Even in darkness, we get the light to move on! Inspiring write! (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (10/8/2016 6:17:00 AM)


    First of all, congratulations, its a very good selection as members poem of the day. The whole poem as usual is full of spiritual thoughts specially the following stanza
    Darkness dazzles while appears light,
    While God's grace falls on us as might.
    Night leaves way to rays to enter Earth,
    In devotion towards God satisfies birth.
    (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (10/8/2016 6:02:00 AM)

    Dazzling Darkness
    Congrats, Kumarmani ji, for being the Poet of the Day. At first sight, the title of the intrigues but as we read the poem, it seems appropriate. Great use of metaphor. Thanks.
    Notable is righteous work with true care.
    While God's grace falls on us as might.
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  • Mizzy ........ (10/8/2016 5:55:00 AM)


    Congratulations Kumarmani.....well written piece!
    The final stanza is the perfect ending!
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  • Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (10/8/2016 5:42:00 AM)

    Dazzling Darkness
    Congratulations for being the celebrated winner as poet of the day for Dazzllind Darkness
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 7, 2016

Poem Edited: Friday, October 7, 2016


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