Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 147,079 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Dear Sparrow - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

You come on flying form far sky
I am waiting for you in balcony
Dear old world bird you come here
I have kept food for you in garden.

Missing you from many days I am
Now I am very much worried for you
With your little brown wings come
Come on flying form branch of tree.

Dear little bird you chirp soon
This is mid morning is perfect for
You get ready and come to my home
I am sitting in folding chair too.

You come we shall gossip more, more
Bags and bags of talk we shall open
Having breakfast together in love
We shall discusses about God father.

Dear sparrow you come to sing soon
Meditation song I want to hear dear
You will sing glory of father near
I shall sit in deep meditation sure.

Topic(s) of this poem: bird, life, nature, spiritual


Comments about Dear Sparrow by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Seema Jayaraman (11/16/2015 6:53:00 AM)


    The erstwhile ubiquitous sparrows.. when I was a small kid, went quietly invisible in the past years, unsung and unnoticed.. happy to know there are so many concerned and missing them.. please do check a few of my haiku's on this subject last month.. (Report) Reply

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  • Bharati Nayak (11/16/2015 5:27:00 AM)


    The sparrows are in danger from mobile tower radiations.These little birds were common sight near our house during childhood.Now they have vanished from sight.Your poem brings alive the childhood memories.There is so much of love and affection for these birds.Such affection for nature liberates our soul and bring closer to God.Thanks for sharing the lovely poem.- - - - - - - - - - - - 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (11/16/2015 4:22:00 AM)


    It is a real joy when you see a little sparrow sit nearby, having her breakfast and talking about things- mundane and divine. Shows the poet's concern for the dwindling number of birds in our vicinity. That's a lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.
    Having breakfast together in love
    We shall discusses about God father.
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  • (11/15/2015 10:04:00 PM)


    Befriending a little sparrow and waiting for it at fixed time of the day shows the sensitive and kind nature of the poet.
    A marvelous poem indeed. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 + points.
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  • Alice Perfect (11/15/2015 9:33:00 PM)


    the marvelous little friends
    we experience
    bless us

    exquisite Kumarmani
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 15, 2015



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