Death Is A Classroom Poem by Sara Pakdoost

Death Is A Classroom



Death is a classroom
A corpse, the teacher
The living, students
The lesson taught
Is written
In an ever quivering hand
On the edges of the soul
Till The bells ring
Class is dismissed
And the playground of life
Calls once more

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Delilah Caszatt 26 July 2006

The imagery in the setting of a classroom is a perfect description of a calling to the willing students. Excellent job! There's a saying, 'When the student is ready the teacher will appear! ' Very well done with a strong delivery of the message.

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Kelly Seale 29 November 2012

This one becons to me with the title, and then grabs hold of my soul with with each stanza... never letting me go until the last two lines... setting me free to go.. run and play! -Outstanding Write Anahita! - I'm now officially a fan! ; -) -Kelly.

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Mousa Mohammadnia 26 November 2012

Your poem is short and shaker.Bravo...

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Sina Farajzadeh 16 November 2012

You know, Anahita is one my favorite names for ladies. The best thing about your poems is the way you convey your thoughts in short lines and poems. I love short and deep poetry. I have the same idea as Delilah has. Best wishes.

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Bri Edwards 16 November 2012

anahita, i probably don't understand this the way you do, but I LIKE IT. i was drawn to the title initially. i'm glad it wasn't like some people's sad, depressing, hopeless sounding poems. i wish all iranians and americans could live life on a playground, a playground where mutual respect and happiness are the rules. thanks for sharing. bri edwards

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Nader Baheri 16 November 2012

Wow, so powerful mind u have.enjoyed it.especially the great ending. muchas gracias for sharing~nb

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