Deer People Poem by Mikael Ejdemyr

Deer People

Rating: 4.8


(for Simon & Ivan)

Prohibited to shoot
we rove invisible
to the world
on the former
castle estate of
others within ourselves


Beneath ample crowns
of phallic beech
trunks dry last
year leaves fabulous
memories hard to
read nightmares mouldering

Tuesday, February 9, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: childhood
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sam Aleks 07 March 2012

you have a way with words, i've never read anything like your work.

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Dulakshi Wakista 18 February 2010

Well done! Good work.Nice thoughts.Nice flow write.

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Allemagne Roßmann 14 February 2010

Beneath ample crowns of phallic beech .......................bravo!

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Mikael Ejdemyr

Mikael Ejdemyr

Borås, Sweden
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