Tuesday, November 18, 2008

Demons Comments

Rating: 5.0

I watch the pain you feel
when you have the need to feed your craving.
It hurts me as much as it hurts you
every tremble, every shake and every cramp

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Judith DaviesWebb
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sky dreams 16 April 2009

this poem is deep to the core.. and the way you portrayed it was brilliantly haunting... to have someone you love so much be so damaged, and you know you can't kill his demons for him, even though you do anything in your power to try.. this is an incredible poem

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~ Jon London ~ 15 April 2009

A touching piece, the heart of love touched in every line, understanding the worries and pain of such love, yet still both hearts are strong

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