Deniable Poem by Inbar

Deniable

Rating: 5.0


Breath in
You take inside the pain
It's eating you inside
You cannot hide

Breath in
You take inside your grief
Deny, you can't believe

And still you drown into your sea
Without inhaling
You don't even try to see
Your eyes are only raining

Within yourself
Ignorance leading you to light
Yet somewhere in your head
You start to realise
It's only lies

Breath in
You take inside the air
And nothing's there

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edwin Empestan (alba) 23 June 2008

Me too I cannot grasp what you are trying to imply or to the whole thought of your message. Anyway it's your style. Have fun!

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