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Desert Rose - Poem by Unwritten Soul

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Bring the lost back to the right path
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (5/23/2019 12:05:00 AM)

    Fragrance soul cant be defeated, killed in any way....most important line in this poem. It is really a marvelous poem wisely delineated. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/22/2017 12:26:00 AM)

    Soul, your distinguished colleagues have said it all. So there's nothing left to be said. Except maybe: Wow! And Wow Again! ! Also, your totally magnificent poem has inspired me to write Unwritten Soul. Hope you like it. (Report)Reply

    Unwritten Soul(8/23/2017 8:23:00 AM)

    Thanks for your poem, i really enjoyed it...and the gentle heart that you poured on this comment is always be my treasure, every friend they are kind enough but you also not exemption...blessed with people surround me, May God bless all of you my dear friends (thats including you my dear Richard Wlodarski)

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  • Captain Cur (8/3/2017 11:26:00 AM)

    The qualities of the desert rose as it pertains to our lives is stunningly depicted in your words. To learn from the unselfish nature of this flower through your keen and detailed observations skills can be balm to many wounded hearts. (Report)Reply

    Unwritten Soul(8/23/2017 8:21:00 AM)

    Words from Captain, it makes me happy whatever it is because you always be kind to me hahahaha...let we be happy all the time by learning from nature...because we part of it... Thanks Captain Cur!

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/2/2017 6:08:00 PM)

    It is a marvelous metaphorical poem based on philosophy where we have to get a lesson from a desert rose. Desert rose, the nature guidance of life
    facing the mirages and lot of illusion, teaches us to stand against the hindrance of life. It may be quoted some lines.....
    no matter what you give to them, the smell of fragrance cant
    be killed by sword, and the smell is the spirit...devotee for better life
    Once again, nature taught me about life...Rose symbol of beauty and fumes
    we must be soft but not easily broken, if broken revive the new hope..
    We should be soft but not to break easily. Gratitude for sharing this gem... 10/10
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    Unwritten Soul(8/23/2017 8:19:00 AM)

    Thank you dear for your kind reply and to really find my words in my deserted lengthy poem hahaha Thanks a lot!

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  • (6/9/2017 1:52:00 PM)

    Magnificent work, Soul. The rose can be the metaphor for the one, the individual, the person. CAn the sand be the metaphor for the many- -the crowd, the mob, the unresponsive elements of humanity that often surround the sentient being? That one rose, standing aside, standing alone, may be teh one that offers hope, strength, and resolve. This is a terrific poem, Soul. (Report)Reply

    Unwritten Soul(6/10/2017 5:37:00 AM)

    My humble thank you to you dear, your words are kind and a bless like rain in desert..Yes that's the meaning i wanted to tell, although i always worry that readers may not understand that but when you say it all, i feel relief because i am not born to be a good writer, i just a dreamer, love to think and to share...it is a long poem and you go through it...Thanks dear, i sincerly appreciate it, each of your kindness to me :)

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  • Rebecca Navarre (11/3/2016 10:52:00 PM)

    Oh My Goodness! ! ! ! ! I Don't Know Where To Began! ! ! Except What A Wonderously Beautiful Poem! ! ! ! !
    Beautifully Written! ! ! ! So Moving! ! ! Love Thoughts And Feelings! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! And The Wonderful Description! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
    Thank You Sooo Dearly For Sharing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10s! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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  • Sharron Stephenson (8/2/2016 7:12:00 AM)

    this poem has made the tears roll down my face really enjoyed reading it (Report)Reply

    Unwritten Soul(8/2/2016 9:32:00 AM)

    Awww thank you Sharron for your sweet words, wipe the tears and move life to it fullest mode

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  • Howard The Motivational Poet Simon (7/25/2016 10:34:00 AM)

    A rich reflection of a rose that surges with the splendor of succes that swims through the swamp. Well done my friend. (Report)Reply

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  • Richard Jarboe (7/2/2016 11:26:00 AM)

    Dandelions are taproots. Taproot motto: You can rip us up but you can't get rid of us. Good job,
    ric
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  • Richard Jarboe (6/16/2016 9:17:00 AM)

    Roses turn to garbage and garbage turns to roses. Good job,
    ric
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  • Richard Jarboe (6/16/2016 9:15:00 AM)

    Strong image understanding of the nature of our existence. Good work,
    ric
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  • Christopher Tye (5/24/2016 7:21:00 AM)

    Wonderful work, you can almost smell the scent of the Desert rose in the air. (Report)Reply

    Unwritten Soul(5/24/2016 11:42:00 PM)

    Thank you Christopher, the scent is never there but in your kind mind...thank you :)

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  • (5/22/2016 4:56:00 AM)

    A marvellous sequence of images centred on the Desert Rose.
    I can't think of a better poem than this on the site, unless one of your own.
    maybe your name means Desert Rose.
    Tom billsborough
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    Unwritten Soul(5/24/2016 11:40:00 PM)

    Thank you Tom for your sweeeeet sweet honey encouraging words....made me happy...

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  • Dev Anand (3/15/2016 2:33:00 AM)

    Beautifuil poem. wonderful imagination. dev (Report)Reply

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  • (2/21/2016 2:51:00 AM)

    Absolutely stunning....I could see and feel the spirit....10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • Kewayne Wadley (2/17/2016 11:57:00 AM)

    The night seems brighter by your whispering melody
    Lullabying desert with sweet enchanting fragrance
    Lay in frozen curse, stay strong to stand all night long

    Lovely written! Strong show of emotion.
    KW
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  • (8/25/2014 6:00:00 AM)

    Beautiful. I t intrests the brain and the imagination. (Report)Reply

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  • Heather Wilkins (7/30/2013 9:43:00 PM)

    a good metaphor. enjoyed the read. if broken revive the new hope (Report)Reply

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  • Ramesh Rai (7/28/2013 2:17:00 AM)

    Soften your soul with blossom
    smiles
    Preserve your beauty with innocent
    fair
    Thorns be ultimate sword, guard
    your pride
    Protect life from harmful touch of
    enemy eyes
    Desert rose,
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  • (4/8/2013 6:31:00 PM)

    Desert Rose is a magnificent metaphor!
    Exceptional!
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