Unwritten Soul


Desert Rose - Poem by Unwritten Soul

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Bring the lost back to the right path
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  • (4/8/2013 6:31:00 PM)

    Desert Rose is a magnificent metaphor!
    Exceptional!
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  • Colin Bradley (10/17/2012 2:37:00 AM)

    WOW! ! ! ! I LOVE THIS POEM (Report)Reply

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  • Valsa George (10/12/2012 2:28:00 AM)

    A desert rose, braving adverse and scorching weather continues to shed fragrance in the surrounding air and helps people find their way in the vast ocean of sands! A nice poem! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (8/16/2012 1:28:00 AM)

    amazing job is done (Report)Reply

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  • (7/29/2012 10:46:00 PM)

    very inspirational and philosophical. Beautifully written for something that does not have these characters. Fortune flowers are called as Desert roses. Could you please explain? I am inquisitive, that is all. unwritten soul, I do not know some other flower that has the qualities that you described here. Please enlighten me. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/26/2012 10:33:00 AM)

    Very nice work.Philosophical and profound! (Report)Reply

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  • Swetha Vanakayalapati (6/20/2012 9:04:00 AM)

    theresa tranquility in each verse opening calling O desert rose....I especially liked

    Desert rose,
    Unveil us the secret of life
    As the only softness will survive when life is so hard
    Soft as water, gentleness not easily broken, a lesson
    The smell of you may call thousands souls back
    Among of them most will care, a little will scare

    a call for learning our true origins! !
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  • Ekaterina M. Polischuk (3/4/2012 9:51:00 AM)

    wonderful poem.... I hadn`t read it before i wrote my poem... :) ... I liked your story because of the philosophical meaning, lots of emotions and mystery of writing words. bravo! (Report)Reply

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  • (12/7/2011 4:11:00 AM)

    A heady poem of excellence with the dessert rose the central figure with a learning to boot, thanks for this shining star; ; ; regards (Report)Reply

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  • Mohammad Muzzammil (12/4/2011 12:59:00 AM)

    one of your fine poems that is rich in both expression and imagery.
    Never stop to give up for any reason, no way
    Fragrance soul cant be defeated, killed in any way.
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  • (12/3/2011 9:34:00 AM)

    wow! exelent it it so full of emotion i wil definatley look at sum more of ur poems ;) (Report)Reply

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  • Cosmic Dreamer (11/29/2011 6:04:00 PM)

    You are quite a talent... I always enjoy reading your words... (Report)Reply

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  • (11/24/2011 7:07:00 AM)

    Hello soul, I wonder at your painting it expresses a lot. I further declare that your imagery, Metaphor used in your poems make you poetry special. i tried to pick my favorite lines and came up with this.........

    Comrades by twinkling stars and moon smiles
    The night seems brighter by your whispering melody

    There is spirituality, There is Philosophy, There is nature, there is life and there is A-Z. You are wholesome poetess. I appreciate thee and I hail your poems...10++++++
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  • (11/23/2011 8:57:00 AM)

    Dear friend soul one from your most amazing poem.Yes soul, rose is really a good symbol meaning for the beauty of our live.Also this painting you had posted with your poem is also very expressive.Well done. (Report)Reply

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  • Cristina Teodor (11/22/2011 5:31:00 PM)

    The scent of a rose guiding spirit to hope even in a desert, nature teach us through your deep innate sense of poetry, that life wins if we follow the instincts of our spirit. This poem is a masterpiece, you are a gifted poet and artist.Your drawing is awesome. Thank you for the light you brought to my heart..Cristina Teodor (Report)Reply

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  • Omar Jabak (11/22/2011 4:42:00 AM)

    Good ideas! ! ! Keep up the good work. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/21/2011 2:08:00 PM)

    Head clashing rhymed sense of love beauty and hope.......Greatly achieved with huge gigantic emotions and a furtive glance of philosophy inside (Report)Reply

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  • (11/21/2011 7:54:00 AM)

    Wow! Wow! ! Wow! ! ! lacking words. Never knew there were so much lessons to learn from the desert rose. this is such a beautiful piece, great work, welldone. (Report)Reply

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  • Hans Vr (11/19/2011 1:30:00 AM)

    Dear Soul,
    This is beautiful. Rare are the poems that have such a high spiritual content. Through the scents and the petals of the desert rose you touch so many bright ideas, intuitions and truths, you provoke so many emotions. The immortality of the scent of the rose like the immortality of our spirit and soul; that is really mastery.
    Please do keep writing poetry. Do keep painting and drawing. Both go fantastically together. The picture you put up gives an extra dimension to your writing.
    As for the intro next to the picture. Please keep hanging around on PH, I do not want to miss your great comments, not only to my poems but also to the poems of others. Your comments makes sense, lighten up our day and given often extra insights.
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  • Elena Sandu (11/17/2011 8:09:00 PM)

    Oh dear, this is a gem shining so much that fills my eyes with tears!
    Thank you for sharing it, please don't ever stop writing, thank you for giving us a chance to see the world through your filled with beauty eyes, am very grateful.
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