Unwritten Soul


Desert Rose - Poem by Unwritten Soul

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Bring the lost back to the right path
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Comments about Desert Rose by Unwritten Soul

  • (11/17/2011 8:09:00 PM)

    wow...my blessed lil bro' you are truly an amazing talent...your poem made my heart ache and made me smile all at the same time...and the artwork..truly amazing....what an honour to be ur big sis....xoxo please keep them coming...never stop what you were born to do.
    -SG
    x
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  • Vipins Puthooran (11/17/2011 1:04:00 PM)

    I'm blessed! ! ! ! What an inspirational poem! ! !
    Life is a prayer to praise Him for He who given us this wonderful life.So I could find certain Philanthropist, Benevolent, Manificient and noble persons in this world.Among them you'll be the topest in my heart....
    Great write here my dear friend, ,
    You are the real artist and a blessed poet, ,
    In this poem you glorify life at its full extent and helping the trodden lives to realize their hidden spirit to come out and to make their life as that of a sun as shiny, even if they are standing like a 'desert rose' in the scorching heat of Sun in this world of desert
    All lines has its spirit that you did portraite here with an amazing metaphor! ! ! ! !
    This poem is one of your masterpieces! ! ! !
    The light of your soul will be a celestial gift, through that so many hearts can find their way in their darkened life, , ,
    An extraordinay poem, , , (((athmave))
    100/100 marks for you! ! ! !
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  • Cosmic Dreamer (11/16/2011 4:30:00 PM)

    Vivid pictures come to life in my minds eye as I read your words... Fantastic poem... Well done... (Report)Reply

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  • (11/16/2011 2:43:00 PM)

    my friend, you know what? ...im greatful to God to grant me the chance to know such a bunch of great people...the whole lot of poets who are in this site......God planted these seeds in your mind, he knew you will share with us everything He gave you.....you're a great writer Soul! (Report)Reply

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  • Jinal Oswal (11/16/2011 1:04:00 AM)

    Amazing, in fact awesome poem.... That's what I think... Never loose hope... Every one in this world has a purpose, some inner strengths to achieve that purpose... Lovely poem... You are a wonderful artist... the painting is beautiful... I am falling short of words: D I am loving it :) (Report)Reply

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  • Abdallah Gamal (11/15/2011 3:47:00 PM)

    Outstanding! I'm completely inspired with this breathing poem. Through every poem you are inspiring the world around us. This is really a quite beautiful picture of beautiful nature. Hats off! This is a gr8 work my dear brother :) I hope you keep up inspiring us with your beautiful ink that never fade. :) 10++++++ (Report)Reply

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  • (11/15/2011 8:19:00 AM)

    absolutely beautiful... you are the Desert Rose! (Report)Reply

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  • Jacqui Broad (11/15/2011 5:51:00 AM)

    US, what a beautiful poem! What a magnificent painting! You are truly one great artistic soul! Thanks for sharing the smell of your desert rose...it filled my soul... (Report)Reply

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  • (11/14/2011 2:14:00 PM)

    Well my lil soul it looks like the site is going to let
    me leave a comment now.
    Like i told you, your desert rose is so full of
    life and colour, an amazing poem from the heart.
    A fantastic write. Can't wait to read more.
    Best wishes
    Your brother

    Dave.
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  • (11/14/2011 2:07:00 PM)

    the smell of you may call thousands souls back
    ... little will scare
    I hear counsel, I see wisdom and most importantly I smell the paint of the artist. PERFECT. Any more words to describe this masterpiece?
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  • Bernard Snyder (11/14/2011 11:22:00 AM)

    Wow! ! 'Us' your artwork is as fascinating as the poem itself! ! You exemplified true talent in every aspect in this 'piece' of work. You're truly a blessing for all of us to have been able to interact with such an artist. Amazing poem and art work. Thank you for sharing and keep that pen' flowing! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (11/14/2011 11:02:00 AM)

    An undying spirit generously contributing to others in various ways and rise above all obstacles depicted as 'desert rose'...feels too timid to comment upon such a rose, simply admire and learn a lesson or two from it.
    Marvelously written, words in short!
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  • (11/13/2011 11:53:00 PM)

    No doubt that it is a Master piece! What a contrast between softness and hardness, he echoing words - we must be soft but not easily be broken.inspires one to face the challenges and needs of the society. Though hard, the fragrance of the desert rose keep's one's love for life always up! I love the theme, tone and message of SOUL :) Marks 10+++++++++ Rekhamandagere (Report)Reply

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  • Ace Of Black Hearts (11/13/2011 8:32:00 PM)

    Wow, I'm just at awe of your description of a desert rose,
    I had to do an essay to describe it on a test once.
    I failed it miserably, for i really didn't have the interest in it or writing at that time.
    It was so hard to me.
    I'm analogical so I write better to solve then describe.

    So thank you for such wonderful poem that reminds me of my youth.
    Your word usage is truly amazing, I wish I could describe a rose as you.
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  • (11/13/2011 10:47:00 AM)

    this is exceptional, outstanding indeed..you have captured that rose, from different angles, like you've known (her) for so very long
    she is strong, she leads the stray home, but she's 'like us' fades and is weakened, but she grows new leafs and she learns to survive...i can't tell you how much i love this poem..it reflects your spirit my friend and how great a poet you are
    i'll read it soo many times, thanks for writing this...Rose
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