asma bahrainwala

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Desire - Poem by asma bahrainwala

I am a well.
Confined by a wall;
Restricted by a boundary;
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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (8/26/2008 6:16:00 AM)

    Shared ur desire. Appreciable emotion for mankind. (Report)Reply

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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (8/26/2008 4:53:00 AM)

    .....fine composition.............10 (Report)Reply

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  • (8/18/2008 12:46:00 AM)

    I'm not sure about the title of this piece. It seems to me that confined or
    restricted may have been a more appropriate title for this. It really wasn't
    a very unique message. I don't think you can put a word like desire in a title
    and expect the reader to be impressed after they read such a writing as this.
    It was, in my view, average.

    GW62
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  • K. V. Venkataramana (3/10/2008 12:27:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem rooted in modern realities. Thanks for shaing.

    K V Venkataramana
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  • rajagopal haran (11/5/2007 4:58:00 AM)

    what an imagination; Great (Report)Reply

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  • (10/14/2007 5:07:00 AM)

    A magnificent roll of designed words that fuel the flames of life-affirming freedom. There's a distinguished feeling of triumph here which runs deep and can bring to mind actual examples in today's complex world of countless social barriers. It's not too hard to embrace and indulge in the strong and righteous visual of it. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/14/2007 5:25:00 AM)

    You are brilliant! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Malini Kadir (4/19/2007 5:00:00 AM)

    Confined by a Wall;
    Restricted by a Boundary;
    Stagnated by it All..............overflowing in poetry! great! ! .
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  • (2/18/2007 4:49:00 AM)

    Please Asma... keep writing such great poems...10 (Report)Reply

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  • (12/16/2006 1:26:00 AM)

    What a striking metaphor! Beautiful succinct expression of everyone's desire to break out of the self and become a part of the whole. This is a really good poem! (Report)Reply

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  • (11/29/2006 9:27:00 AM)

    Very good! I like the brick by brick! ! ! !
    Good work!

    SusanB
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  • (11/22/2006 9:15:00 AM)

    Lovely poemo Asma.

    Take care
    Roger
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  • (11/22/2006 6:54:00 AM)

    gr8 poem asma.I liked it very much.
    yours,
    Nida
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  • (10/9/2006 2:06:00 PM)

    I greatly enjoyed this one. Such a wonderful expression of your feelings. So simple and direct. I can relate to these words so very much. Great job! (Report)Reply

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  • Brian Dorn (9/28/2006 9:23:00 AM)

    Asma, there's nothing stagnant about your poetry... I'd say it flows quite nicely. Great write! !
    Brian
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  • (9/17/2006 6:22:00 AM)

    Break the walls and flow! ! The essence of water is same in the well or a river or an ocean...its the environment that makes it stagnant or flow or turbulent....
    Well crafted poem.
    TO
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