Sunday, January 24, 2010

Despair Comments

Rating: 4.3
Distraught
That's what I am
Why does the world
have to be like this?

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Emma Kessler
COMMENTS
Despair is a goblin that catches you When you don't believe in yourself This life is not designed to be always blue Have eyes for other colors too............... Good poem and I welcome you to my page too
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Amy Marie 06 November 2011
Yeah...everybody can relate to this sometimes.
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Marina Gasbey 10 August 2010
Wow, The mood of the poem is captivating! And the way it is set up is magical! I can really appreciate this poetry! ... Marina Gasbey.
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Lindbergh Hughes 11 April 2010
Nice and Great poem, Emma...I loved this one very much.The way you describe your innermost thoughts and feelings are very very well.Without speaking that the rhymes in this poem are different from the rest of your poems or others works that I've already read in this site.'How can I heal these scars left on my heart? ..'I loved this line very much.Your strong feelings, that's so normal for a poet, and the way you describe diging deeply your thought at the same way, show that, bit by bit, you have shaped your mind according one of the ways of writing poems.
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Rajkumar Mukherjee 05 March 2010
Dear EMMA, This is a better poem though of sadness. I personally, can't support such sadness that I'm unable to live one more day. You 've created an aliteration by using three words pain, sadness, confusion. At your age, you have talents and you can express yourself better by marshalling a few tricks, like metaphorical use or use of imagery and why not use a Thaserus to find synonims which will increase the depth of your poem Don't take it otherwise. I liked the poem and rated highly Rajkumar
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Thor Fabian Pettersen 04 March 2010
When I read this poem I thought (she is not writing a poem, she is writing herself!) And that is the most powerful theme of all. How many people do we really know in life? I know my family. My friends. But the only one I truly know is I; I do not really (with empathies on the, “really”) know my family and friends (if you know what I mean?) It`s inspiring to read about true human emotion for a change: -)
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Doll Hardcore 20 February 2010
i read a few of your poems and i can say that i really enjoyed them(good work!) ...you have great talent and your an exellent writer!
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Miss Rainbow 20 February 2010
very deep i can relate as you could tell from my poems thanks for taking you time to read my poems musch appreciated
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Apple Sorongon 20 February 2010
I like this one.very well said. :))
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John Raubenheimer 09 February 2010
In this poem you show your gift for transforming awful feelings into inspiring words - inspiring because you show courage and strength of mind. Keep writing! (And keep reading and learning.)
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Amanda Shelton 07 February 2010
This is a peace of work keep going and you well be something great. Great job! ! !
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Trade Martin 26 January 2010
Emma, you display strong writing talent for your age. Keep reading the legendary poets because their various styles and subject matter will inspire you to write better and better and broaden your compositional scope into different topics, Regards, Trade Martin.
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