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Destructive

Rating: 3.1

she’s a martyr
a prophet
a poet

but

she shattered her
future, her confidence, her courage.

he’s a hero
a lover
an idiot

but

he shattered his
future, his confidence, his courage

together
they shattered their passion.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Uriah Hamilton 25 May 2006

Maybe we all kill what we love, maybe we all kill ourselves.

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Adryan Barnathan 24 May 2006

I think this is unique Sus....I'm going to get therapy now...as usual your insight rings clear.

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Alexzia Ferdinand 02 December 2006

i love this..the simplicity blends it all together....very poignant....write on! Alexzia

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Alexzia Ferdinand 02 December 2006

i love this..the simplicity blends it all together....very poignant....-Alexzia

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Brian Dorn 03 June 2006

Sus, heros tend to steal a martyr's thunder, especially if they act like an idiot... interesting write! ! Brian

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Maxim Muyu 30 May 2006

I can imagine the destructive forces behind our minds, like Ayn Rand said of the unbearable volition in our mind's that is found in the natural world and their power's fade, since in this poem the great prophet's can learn if not careful they can go astray from the true supernatural volition and melodrama.

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Kee Thampi 26 May 2006

You made a best poem. Real poem is a gift of a open mind. Flow of words.Real gift of God

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