Disturbed Mind V1.0 Poem by Kamal Lalwani

Disturbed Mind V1.0

Rating: 5.0


demon is rising in every mind
darkness falling all over us

lets make the every child cry
with that madness in the eye

lets creap others out
by eating some zombies with that demonish smile

the heavy metal rules the world
can be heard from every head

now its my time
to cut in pieces
rost the every flesh of yours

are you scared,

are you

but u r going to be eaten alive

i m riding the tide

hahahaha....

the tide of blood

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 06 February 2012

Like it, a great poem, great work. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Parallel life.

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Kamal Lalwani

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Jaipur, India
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