Tuesday, October 12, 2021

Divine Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

With all the strength
I lash out at the shore
Hurling the ego pride And hypocrisy in the air Showing this world
The mighty strength

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Aarzoo Mehek
COMMENTS
Soran M. H 14 October 2021

part1 A beautiful poem, every words in it is invaluable, from the power of its eloquence and the elevated meanings,

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Soran M. H 14 October 2021

part 2 through the sea expresses high human feelings we all wish to decorate ourselves with, and thank you for your sharing with us these gems.

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Soran M. H 14 October 2021

And empathy overpowers The sleepy, misdirected heart.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 October 2021

This fascinating poem intrigues me, long time no see, dear poetess, but your poem consists great philosphy of life, profound poem to be pondered about. I have enjoyed very much 5 Stars full

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M Asim Nehal 13 October 2021

Fabulous poetry. Welcome back.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 October 2021

The mighty strength Cradling in the ocean Of my divine heart....wonderful expression! An excellent poem.

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