Tuesday, November 6, 2012

**do Not Hit Me Below The Belt, Please Comments

Rating: 4.8

Do not hit me, please, below the belt


I am already harassed a lot

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Abdul Wahab
COMMENTS
Heather Wilkins 20 May 2013

No one likes to be hit below the belt. That is a low blow. Yes I had to chuckle with this one.

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Diane Hine 06 November 2012

I enjoyed the contrast between the second last stanza and the polite 'please' in the last line. Entertaining.

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Karen Sinclair 06 November 2012

I love the brutality of this piece, so to the core, no barrs held and the three ugly sisters made me smile, set this in a theatrical scene...the layout is unusual and i like it also...tyvm karen

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