Sumita Datta

Rookie - 20 Points (Digboi(Assam))

Do You Agree? - Poem by Sumita Datta

Sugar is sweet
Sweet is honey
But more than that
One feels sugary
His very first salary…

Coffee is bitter
Bitter is bear…
More bitter is when a prostitute
Faces her first customer

Salt is salty
Salty is sea water
More than that one feels salty
Under the sun,
Waiting for other…

Tamarind is sour,
Sour is grape…
More than that
Sour is the situation
When a girl is being raped…

Chili is hot
So hot is Indian spice
But, you become hotter
When your kid lies…

Comments about Do You Agree? by Sumita Datta

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (10/18/2008 12:28:00 PM)

    Interesting poem.
    10 for it, agree to some extent.
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  • Palas Kumar Ray (9/12/2008 1:04:00 PM)

    I dont agree.
    But the poem is well written in a very tradition Indian folk format.
    Keep it up Sumita.
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  • (9/5/2008 6:59:00 AM)

    I do agreed......100% Its true and factual behavioral events in human existence. (Report) Reply

  • Sarwar Chowdhury (9/3/2008 2:15:00 PM)

    A 10 for this stirring....soothing....ammmmmazing composition. (Report) Reply

  • (8/29/2008 6:51:00 AM)

    I love the unique format and use of words. Intereseting poetry adventure. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 29, 2008

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