JoJo Bean

(dodge Dave Tale) Dodgy Dave Deserves A Break Today

Dodgy Dave deserves a break today.
He's writing so fast, his fingers are whittling away.
He just finished his book
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  • Carol Gall (9/14/2009 1:21:00 PM)

    dodgy dave eh funny...

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  • Lime and Tequila with a Splash of Pineapple (2/5/2008 8:55:00 AM)

    Hehe, a fun poem that screams out as the words spill upon paper. Take a break when you can.

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  • Meggie Gultiano (8/21/2007 8:34:00 AM)

    Really enjoyed this one, my dear..it's very funny..and oh, i think, David deserves a break, and i wanted him to dance with me..tell him..ha ha..

    hugs,
    Meggie

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  • Shelley L Baxter-stanley (5/31/2007 7:35:00 PM)

    Great fun poem and an easy read which was an enjoyable one! Joanne I love the rhyme scheme and just the overall good feeling the poem keeps from beginning to end...Just reading this poem lets me know you have much to say and you know how to say it!
    Keep up the good work.....
    =Shelley=

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  • Melvina GermainMelvina Germain (5/18/2007 9:04:00 PM)

    Another wonderful Dodgy Dave tale, fantastic, these are great JoJo. Dave I'm learning new things about you.--Melvina--

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  • David Harris (5/18/2007 5:43:00 PM)

    JoAnn, Dodgy can't take a break I'm afraid he has got a sermon to write for his Sunday service, then some more poems just to keep my friend all smiling or crying at his grammar. (which isn't very good) . Another great poem. Thank you for this my friend. Top marks from me.
    Dodgy Dave

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  • ... Sheila (5/18/2007 2:33:00 PM)

    Yes, Dodgy....take a break and let us know how all goes with your book! Oh, and take it easy with the hip swaying.....lol.

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