Friday, December 16, 2011

Dole Out Dull Comments

Rating: 4.0
You talk to me too much-
From hell and heaven to cricket match.
Still I find you a squib damp dump.
The gray matter remains nimble numb.


Abdul Wahab
Azmat Naushad Asif 23 May 2012
if i may say, this poem is a taunt....n a very good one at that
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Harindhar Reddy 23 January 2012
Tweet -tweet! Yes some people speak too much but in the end we need to search for the meaning. But however, it is natural that we speak lot and read lot which is a truth! However, I see it from other angle, I feel this poem is biographical in nature as it mentions i read poet to poet, poetry to poetry. I think our loveable poet is analyzing with reasoning power! I strongly feel the same in this age of dark we lack spark in our bark which is truth stark; as said by the poet let me hark. I congratulate my fellow countryman from Indian park for write this poem! 100/100 marks! Keep going, keep writing, keep flying! Kudos!
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Rony Sk 14 January 2012
great creation.....! ! ! gooooood poem......
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Shahzia Batool 20 December 2011
magic of alliteration! ! good effect!
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Salema Khatun 18 December 2011
really some people talk very stupid way, even the triffling thing get their praise and admiration. they do not know the other way of things.
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Vipins Puthooran 17 December 2011
[Like th' harmonious madness] A nice poem! !
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Vipins Puthooran 17 December 2011
[Like a harmonious madness] A nice poem! !
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Salema Khatun 17 December 2011
I have gone through yours, would you like to read mine. “ the idea of an idea’
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