Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 82,328 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

Don'T You Feel Better Already? - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

The only thing we have in common,
Is nothing.
And the more of that we share...
The better off we will be!
Think about it.
Don't you feel better already?
It's a weight lifted off my shoulders,
I know that!

Comments about Don'T You Feel Better Already? by Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • (1/22/2008 12:36:00 AM)

    how bout - is everything. like, maybe i missed the point; but doesn't that make more sense, given the recourse of your unfolding verse? love, sjg (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 22, 2008

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