Chelsea Hansford

Dont Be Fooled

You look right through me,
As though im a pane of glass,
So transparent, you say
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  • Brian DornBrian Dorn (3/31/2007 12:04:00 AM)

    There is nothing at all 'transparent' about this piece... it's certainly worthy of a good hard look. Well done, Chelsea! !
    Brian

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjrFrank James Ryan Jr...fjr (3/30/2007 11:52:00 PM)

    Powerful written elocution, young lady...Well done, indeed...Structure is crisp & mellifluous as a penny tossed 'cross an icepond....Liked your metaphoric opening.
    Solid crafting, Chelsea..Looking forward to visiting your work again.

    ~ F.j.c.R. ~

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