Tuesday, August 2, 2005

Dream Comments

Rating: 3.8

dont look at me through eyes that see.
but eyes that feel instead.
i sit and cry.
i never try.


Heather Devlin
Gina PrettyBrownEyes 25 August 2005

'eyes that feel instead' my fav part. we all would be so much happier if we felt each others hearts with our eyes, instead of seeing what is on the outside. you rock

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Aashish Ameya 03 August 2005

i like the line'look to the past to see the truth'. its nice verse. otherwise poem is ok-ok.

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