saadat tahir

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Dream Of Desire....Unrequited Love - Poem by saadat tahir

Us
Thus
We make our dream
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  • Farah IlyasFarah Ilyas (1/28/2012 12:03:00 PM)

    wao great combination of rhythm & rhyme...i hv'nt any word to show my expression for this musician's type of poem...really enjoying..one of my feet starting movement up & down, down & up hmmmm (Report)Reply

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  • Farah IlyasFarah Ilyas (1/28/2012 12:03:00 PM)

    wao great combination of rhythm & rhyme...i hv'nt any word to show my expression for this musician's type of poem...really enjoying..one of my feet starting movement up & down, down & up hmmmm (Report)Reply

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  • Shirley Woods (8/8/2009 2:27:00 PM)

    Hello,

    Beautifully suggestive and like those dreams, this poem lingers on in your mind for a long time afterwards........
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  • Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate (8/7/2009 1:13:00 AM)

    wowwwwwww...and iam saying why your poems are full of music..slow handssssss...this poem cheers me while enjoying reading it..that beauty of surrendering to the lure of a loving love.... (Report)Reply

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  • Lynda Robson (6/22/2009 9:01:00 AM)

    A dream of desire written so well, good flow to this
    10
    Lynda xx
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  • Catrina Heart (6/9/2009 10:14:00 AM)

    Dream of desire you have woven fabulously...nice rhymes both internal and end rhymes...10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • Kafil Uddin Raihan (6/9/2009 4:38:00 AM)

    My dream sawn....really excellent sir! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Duh Huh (6/1/2009 9:00:00 AM)

    I love how you took this poem from beginning to end with such a great flow and rhyme. It tells a touching story of romance and love. Thank you for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (5/31/2009 7:40:00 AM)

    Great rhyme and beautiful imagery. I really admired the way after 'moon long gone has dimmed' it cleverly spans down to the left with gorgeous metaphors of passion and love. 10 Karin Anderson (Report)Reply

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  • Priyanka BhowmickPriyanka Bhowmick (5/29/2009 10:44:00 PM)

    'Barefoot to you.
    Took off my shoe.
    You my prayer.
    Stood you there.
    Temple of my desire.' wonderful write.
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  • Joseph Poewhit (5/26/2009 7:13:00 AM)

    The YOU & I at the end brings it all tpgether. (Report)Reply

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