Subbaraman N V

Dream While You'Re Awake!

Dream while you're awake
To build the world you want to make
Help plan the steps you need to take
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  • Gita AshokGita Ashok (6/28/2010 3:02:00 AM)

    The words here flow so beautifully as in a melodious song.

    Dreaming while awake
    Building castles in the air
    Are but initial steps in its wake
    To be fine tuned to the needs with care!

    The way the first two stanzas have been weaved together here in the above four lines is remarkable. The last stanza is filled to the brim with worldly wisdom. A great composition, indeed!

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  • Mary Das (11/27/2007 11:45:00 PM)

    Very well written. Yes, we all can relate to this. Thank you for sharing.

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