Dreaming Poem by Miriana Serle

Dreaming

Rating: 4.5


Beyond my touch,
Beyond ones reach.
Beyond known,
And Beyond words.
Out of sight,
And in sea.
Sails someone,
Searching for.
Beyond not knowing,
How will I sleep.
My ship set sail,
To find you.
My compass isn't working,
And I dont know where you are.
I dont know how to get to you,
But my direction is strait forth.
I sense the wild wind change,
And listen but, no..
I can not hear you,
I can not find.
I dont have a map,
But it said go this way.
I feel that I am closer now,
But we are still apart.
Im feeling all these feelings,
And I only feel half full.
I breath in this wind,
And I close my eyes.
Why am I searching,
Is this how it is.
Why cant I see you,
Its cold and your not near.
Why havent I found you yet,
My heart beats one hundred miles per minute.
I think I forgot to tell you something,
That you are the only one.
I didnt remind you,
That I am in love!
And now you forgot me,
And I told you I'll be there.
You didnt believe me,
And now im here.
Im sorry I couldnt help you,
And now your really lost.
Im sorry I didn't pinch you,
I dont believe this is a dream.
But now if you could pinch me,
I really wish I could wake up.
Cause your hearts within a distance,
But I still hold you closer then you think.
But I still can not see you,
But I can feel your warmth.
Finally within a distance,
I see a boat like yours.
I shout to you but cant see you,
I row onward to your boat.
I still can not see you,
So I look over into your boat.
I see you peacefully sleeping,
I reach over and I pinch you.
And you opened your eyes and say my name,
I drop to your arms and hold you once again.
I whisper in your ear,
I told you I'll always be there.
I told you that your dreaming,
And now it's time for us to wake.

Tuesday, September 29, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life,sad love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sad love poem. My lover was depressed.Written 29/3/2010
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 27 October 2015

Lovely romantic piece of poetry, well articulated and subtly penned from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. A beautiful love poem written with insight. Thanks for sharing Miriana. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 29 September 2015

A poignant and well written poem, Miriana. Thanks

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Fabrizio Frosini 29 September 2015

'sad love poem', you say.. but love and sadness often go along this way.. keep on writing, Miriana Welcome! p.s.: pay attention to typos when posting ;)

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