poet anais vionet

anais vionet

Drunk Love..

I'm in LOVE - drunk love,
look stupid love - and I
expect a harsh trial.

A hurricane is
due - the sky is coldly-gray,
and the wind is fierce.

Tech issues have school
on hold and walking is a
peak-experience.

Then - the blue gray truck
rounds the corner and I'm hit
with Christmas-like joy.

I LOVE shopping,
like a lush loves drink or a
gambler loves risk.

It's nigh erotic.
How can YOU resist it? Please
- tell me your secret? ? ! !

** Amazon trucks are blue gray =]

Topic(s) of this poem: addiction, humor, shopping, teen

Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 20, 2020
Poem Edited: Sunday, September 20, 2020

Form: Senryu


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Poet's Notes about The Poem

shopping.. it's a narcotic for prison world

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Comments about Drunk Love.. by anais vionet

  • M Asim NehalM Asim Nehal (9/29/2020 12:44:00 PM)

    This is a fantastic poem. Though it is not " Senryu" , for this poem to be senryu you need to follow the syllables rules 5-7-5 for sets of three lines. Anyways those are just the formats, if I look beyond the forms and formats then this poem does have humour, addition and a teen touch.5 Stars.....

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  • Esoteric Mary (9/20/2020 10:01:00 PM)

    You are too young for your own good. Take a few years to mature. Your poetry will benefit from many tears. Now, be off to enjoy your life. Or, put your true age so we can engage on a proper level.

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