Tuesday, December 1, 2009

*** Dubai Debacle **** Comments

Rating: 3.2
The dentist's voice echoed
from the valley of bicuspid.
Unseen, insignificant roots
that held ground so far,


Nikunj Sharma
Pradyumna Jyotir 29 January 2010
your satire is so does not make fun of makes one to pause and think.....the flavor is fresh like the Sheikh Shake.good work Nikunj...just keep writing.
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Janani Ashwin 29 December 2009
Your grace in presentation of a visit to the dentist and reflections with imaginative ease is conspicuous. Thanks. janani
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george george 20 December 2009
Subtle sarcasm works well here. Nicely thought out, flows smoothly. Well done!
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 14 December 2009
nation and the rulers everywhere cheat the common such levels...nothing can happen overnight
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Robbie Squires 14 December 2009
this was great, i absolutely loved the imagery and the fact that i could cleary picture a scene in my mind. awesome job :)
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Fay Slimm 13 December 2009
Well thought through and amusing too - - you have captured the feel of the event with gory reality - - - well done 10 Fay
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Hippie Girl 13 December 2009
Very descriptive. I liked it!
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Ravi Sathasivam 07 December 2009
Very creativity poem. Great imagination is mixed here. Well penned Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me
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Nikunj Sharma 07 December 2009
Comment from LADY GRACE: this piece is different from normal i will say, this is another good, what happened to the canine... premolars and the hemorrhage syndrome? ...well, i like this in the way it is represented, , , from sheik shake.....and from sands in the desert where cacti are goshhhhhhhhhhhhh...actually, so nice the presentation of course...aside from educational, it also introduces new terminologies for everyone..nice idea and nice i had promised, as the sun rises in east, i'll be in your page my its 6am here and the sun starts to shine in the mountains of the promise land, mindanao...smileeeeeeeeeeeeeee please put that in my commnts...i cant open ur commnt goshhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, , i dont know..i send it many times but it is not allowed, , , so i have no patient to goshhhhhhhh, i have to go so i'll leave these wrds for ur commnt.please do the favor to write this in your 'dubai debacle''..thanks for inviting...
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Kesav Easwaran 07 December 2009
allegorical write on the issue...imaginative piece...very well composed...10
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Charles Wanjohi 07 December 2009
This piece is interesting one cannot but love to read it the more. Keep it up.
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Tony Stevens 07 December 2009
Very clever poem Nikunj, well done.
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Sandra Martyres 04 December 2009
'Now senses shall spring where cement once stayed. Back home the juice corner introduced a new flavor, sheikh shake. ' Great write Nikunj.....with Sheikhs shaking and cactii reflecting in the glass buildings that have replaced the sandy desert tracks...very imaginative indeed..
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Deborah Cromer 03 December 2009
Imagination mixed with your creativity is a very interesting combination! Entertaining and fun to read! Makes one really think. DC
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Your imagination knows no bounds Nikunj and you have come up with such an original idea and sheik shake is so brilliant. Great writing! 10 love Karin
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Joseph Poewhit 01 December 2009
sheik shake - that is one for the record books.
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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 01 December 2009
Too good, too, i find evrything great in your arena.
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Philip Gee 01 December 2009
Yes quite interesting, well written poem, were you working there, quite a bringdown for Dubai, many companies getting a Sheik Shake. You have written a lot I will read themover time.
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Carol Gall 01 December 2009
good write nothing is for sure as they found out its kind of sad 10
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C. P. Sharma 01 December 2009
Ingenious labels for Dubai Debacle. CP
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