Monday, December 22, 2008

Early Spring, Autumn Leaves (4 Haiku) Comments

Rating: 3.0
early spring
so many robins
worrying the worms

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Ben Gieske
COMMENTS
Robert Howard 05 January 2009
Lovely and elegant. I enjoy the way the second and third stanzas each carry forward an element from the preceding stanza, Robert
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Anjali Sinha 26 December 2008
lovely haikus robins worrying worms leaves-goodbyes to summer shade and sand questioning fingers great -10 anjali
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