Sunday, October 25, 2015

Earth And Ocean (The Man Who Wanders By The Ocean) Comments

Rating: 3.8

Dig your sturdy fingers deeper
in the barren heart of earth
searching for wings
someone else buried long ago

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Agatha Eliza
COMMENTS
Georgie Hilderman 29 May 2016

Very nice rhythm. I like the specific moods created throughout the poem.

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