Echo Poem by Inbar

Echo



Drowning in your tears,
Choking,
Screaming words you cannot hear

Is it your face,
Or is it just the mask you wear to hide?

Silence.
Echo of the night.

Just one moment-
All was gone.
Washed away with tears of angels.
Words I never knew before
Singing in my blood

In silence.
Echo of the night.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yaseen Anwer 10 October 2008

A poweful stroke by pen Very fine construction beautiful theme deserve 10+ keep going.......

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Hannah Martin 07 October 2008

Nicely put together! :) Love how you refered to the spiritual 'mask'. Lovely work!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 20 July 2008

so powerful I could feel it. very good. sathya narayana

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