####edge Of A Dream##### Poem by Nikunj Sharma
####edge Of A Dream#####
Soft hum dissolves into hypnotised air;
That surrounds the sleeping angel.
Sweetened breaths travel the nasal freeway;
As the hum transforms into silent beats.
A night annouces its arrival somewhere;
As the dark is chased away by a divine lamp.
Tender steps begin an unknown journey;
Through the well lit streets of heart.
A fountain breaks free to kiss the air;
Gleaming droplets smile in unseen cradle.
New found thoughts travel up; the heart
begins to dance on rhythm of the beats.
Thoughts cascade, patches of green appear; mind travels faster than light, closed eyes visualize what life can't bestow. Cracked window frame and creaking bed await as always.
18th October 2009
Breathtaking imagery which instantaneously teleports the mind to a surreal land! well done!
I travel with you through this tenderly beautiful poem; a stream of thoughts as they flow watching adoringly a sleeping child, blissfully unaware of what life holds while the poet reflects on nature of man's journey in this world and acceptance of mortal nature of flesh and body. the beauty of poem is that it is open to several interpretations in accordance with the readers own experience. goes to my fav a remarkable poem Nikunj Mamta
I travel with you through this tenderly beautiful poem; a stream of thoughts as they flow watching adoringly a sleeping child, blissfully unaware of what life holds while the poet reflects on nature of man's journey in this world and acceptance of mortal nature of flesh and body. the beauty of poem is that it is open to several interpretations in accordance with the readers own experience. goes to my fav a remarkable poem Nikunj Mamta
I travel with you through this tenderly beautiful poem; a stream of thoughts as they flow watching adoringly a sleeping child, blissfully unaware of what life holds while the poet reflects on nature of man's journey in this world and acceptance of mortal nature of flesh and body. the beauty of poem is that it is open to several interpretations in accordance with the readers own experience. goes to my fav a remarkable poem Nikunj Mamta
Nik, this is now my favorite out of all of yours! ! You amaze me with your choice of words and the direction you go in.... I'm speechless. You, my friend, are a natural born writer!
Whatever you do, please do not give up on writing. You do it extremely well and this piece of poetry - you excel.......blessings, arya
Intensely descriptive and full of creativity. Sweet slumber and magic surround your words. Very nice and especially dreamy! Debbie
A fountain breaks free to kiss the air; Gleaming droplets smile in unseen cradle. New found thoughts travel up; the heart begins to dance on rhythm of the beats. You swept me away into your dreams! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! -10 love anjali
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/22/2024 6:07:01 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Imagery laden poem..just left to the reader to go on with their imagination free..Winnie