Monday, June 30, 2014

Elegy Comments

Rating: 4.0
The human tongue, in disbelief, obsesses
at the tender pit of a tooth,

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Sean Nevin
COMMENTS
Heather Stein 10 February 2017
I cannot come up with a better metaphor for how our return to the parts of our grief that pain us softly but reduce us to incapacitate via attrition than a lost tooth. I love how cankers in the middle of the final stance is the only word with a hard consonant - and the onomatopoeia of the word raw for the sounds of anguish.
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