Wednesday, June 14, 2006

Elements Of Ecstasy Comments

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Exquisite bliss, unabashed reveling,
Stormy, breathtaking, exhilarating sky
Wind whips around, hair surrenders to the unruly
Thunderclouds and vibrant sunshine collide.

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Landrey 20 June 2006

I love stanza 3, it's so powerful. -landrey

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Jonzo Bandwagoner 17 June 2006

Spectacular! I felt like I was experiencing the moment right along with the narrarator-such incredible passion and imagery. Great job! Jonzo

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