Sunday, October 21, 2012

Epiphany Comments

Rating: 4.6
Once upon a time I dreamed
I dreamed there was a once upon a time
I dreamed with the mind that dreams
I dreamed in the darkness of dreams


Harley White
Chandini Jaswal 10 August 2019
A lovely concoction of imagination, creativity and rhythm. It also has an equally engrossing narrative. This poem has introduced me to a completely new genre of writing poems. Your compositions have so much to teach new poets like me!
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Harley White 10 August 2019
I'm very pleased that you read and enjoyed the poem and took the time and trouble to make some remarks about it. If it also inspired your own creativity, so much the better. Thank you for letting me know!
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Olivia 21 March 2018
This poem is amazing! ! ! ! I love it so much that at my school then we have a fine arts festival every year and everyone has to memorize a poem and so I picked this one because its just so inspirational and calming to a little 6th grader like me! ! ! ! Thank you so much Ms White! ! ! ! ! This poem really inspired me to write stories! ! ! ! ! !
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Harley White 22 March 2018
Olivia, you have quite overwhelmed me with your enthusiasm and complimentary comment! This must have been a very long poem for you to memorize and I’m impressed with your efforts! I am so glad that my poem inspired you, and your appreciation has truly inspired me as well! What else could a poet hope for than to touch another heart so deeply! Thank you very much for sharing your reaction with me!
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Pamela Sinicrope 25 August 2016
I don't know allot about Buddhism, but I like what I am reading in your poetry and in looking up your inspiration. I looked at your website and it is much easier to follow your poem in its proper format. This is a prime example of a poem that is strengthened by the use of form. I see that Nam-myoho-renge-kyo is a meditational chant that helps lead the pracitioner to epiphany? I love the line, I dreamed I would not speak the babbling gossip of the air. I love the use of words in this poem, they seem so carefully selected and meaningful, but also at the same time, they lend to the chanting form of the reading. The repetition, in a strange way, seems to help the mind to focus and cancel out the background 'noise.' Thoroughly enjoyable read. Well written and throughtful. Thanks for sharing.
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Harley White 25 August 2016
Ah, Pamela, you have delved deeply and gone to the link for the poem. This is a subject very close to my heart! Yes, the rhythm and sound are all-important. That single phrase encapsulates the entirety of existence... and always more than I can fathom, even after forty years of practicing (reciting) it... There are so many misconceptions about Buddhism. If you are interested, I recommend exploring the website, which has a wealth of material (constantly being updated) . The main page is the following: http: //
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Navod Dilhara 28 February 2016
A wonderful poem Harley.!
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Harley White 25 August 2016
Thanks so much, Navod!
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Dr Antony Theodore 13 January 2016
I dreamed of a ceaseless self within the self within the self I dreamed of my self I dreamed I would awaken awaken from the dream of death and birth.. very much mystical......... your thoughts are very high and philosophical and poetic. thank you very much. tony
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Harley White 25 August 2016
Yes, it is like going deeper and deeper within... and more... Thank you, Tony!
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Yawar Maajed 28 December 2015
amazing amazing amazing poem.
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Harley White 25 August 2016
Thank you, thank you, thank you!
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