Sunday, October 19, 2008

Eternal Silence Comments

Rating: 4.7

Silence
Silence when we are walking,
Silence when we think,
Silence is what fills us all,

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Okami Kamikaze
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Silence Silence when we are walking, Silence when we think, Silence is what fills us all, With a binding eternal link. silence is our choice...10 good poem to be enjoyed...10 read mine you go alone and silence please.... why we need rest?

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Greenwolfe 1962 28 January 2009

This is a wonderful way of addressing an issue that is ever present but never addressed. I was also impressed by the structure you chose to express it. Repetition is excellant and warranted to make the point. I was very pleased. GW62

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